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PostPosted: Wed Aug 05, 2015 10:36 pm 
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Hi Everyone I Finished My New Website Could Everybody Please Share The Link To As Many People As You Can Im Guessing It Will Be Hard To Find My Website If Nobody Knows About It.If You Could Maybe Share It On Facebook Or Something That Would Be Great Thanks.http://brandon-faustino.wix.com/parrot-trainer



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PostPosted: Wed Aug 05, 2015 10:46 pm 
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Honestly don't think my sharing will help any. All my bird owning friends live in the U.S., so I doubt you could help any of their birds if they need it.

However, word of advice: Spelling and grammar are both VERY important in business. If you want your website to look professional, it would be great to keep that in mind. The more professional a website looks, the more people may be interested in your services. :) The layout is nice, and I do like the use of the images, though, but if you want people to take it seriously, it needs to sound as good as it looks, so to say.

If you need someone to proof-read, I'll be glad to help you. :)



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PostPosted: Wed Aug 05, 2015 11:13 pm 
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JessiMuse wrote:
Honestly don't think my sharing will help any. All my bird owning friends live in the U.S., so I doubt you could help any of their birds if they need it.

However, word of advice: Spelling and grammar are both VERY important in business. If you want your website to look professional, it would be great to keep that in mind. The more professional a website looks, the more people may be interested in your services. :) The layout is nice, and I do like the use of the images, though, but if you want people to take it seriously, it needs to sound as good as it looks, so to say.

If you need someone to proof-read, I'll be glad to help you. :)

What to u mean by proof read? And how can I make it easier for people to find my website.



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Proof-read means to have someone fix all of the spelling and grammar errors, to make it sound better. No offense, but I couldn't help but notice that you use run-on sentences quite often (which is when there are no proper punctuations in sentences), and that can look pretty bad for business. I know how to make it sound better, if you're willing to take my help.

As for making it easier for people to find, you could try advertising on craigslist. Or Angieslist, if that website works in your area. They're both meant for advertising.



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PostPosted: Thu Aug 06, 2015 1:19 am 
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I looked at your web site and thought it looked good....
I'll share on F/B....
Shame Im in Wales.... would be good to learn off you... :thanks: for sharing....



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JessiMuse wrote:
Proof-read means to have someone fix all of the spelling and grammar errors, to make it sound better. No offense, but I couldn't help but notice that you use run-on sentences quite often (which is when there are no proper punctuations in sentences), and that can look pretty bad for business. I know how to make it sound better, if you're willing to take my help.

As for making it easier for people to find, you could try advertising on craigslist. Or Angieslist, if that website works in your area. They're both meant for advertising.

Ok I would love u to help thank you.



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You should make fliers and put them near bird shops and bird rescues.

Do you harness train? If you were near by I would love for you to come over and help me harness train my conure. I'm horrible at training.


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PostPosted: Thu Aug 06, 2015 7:41 am 
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You should make fliers and put them near bird shops and bird rescues.

Do you harness train? If you were near by I would love for you to come over and help me harness train my conure. I'm horrible at training.

Thanks for the idea.Yes I do harness training



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PostPosted: Thu Aug 06, 2015 11:06 am 
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Alright. I've sent you a PM with my revised versions.

Also I'm curious. Have you ever done flight recall training? I plan on getting into it once my bird Lucy trusts me enough. Flying it a great exercise for birds, both physically and mentally, and I'm sure owners would like having their bird fly to them on command. :) If you do cover flight recall, then that could also be worth mentioning.

If you do potty training, that could also be a good one to put on the website, if you cover it. Most people wouldn't know it possible, when it really is possible, and I'm sure a lot of owners would love to not have their bird poop in one spot rather than everywhere.



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PostPosted: Thu Aug 06, 2015 11:29 am 
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JessiMuse wrote:
Alright. I've sent you a PM with my revised versions.

Also I'm curious. Have you ever done flight recall training? I plan on getting into it once my bird Lucy trusts me enough. Flying it a great exercise for birds, both physically and mentally, and I'm sure owners would like having their bird fly to them on command. :) If you do cover flight recall, then that could also be worth mentioning.

If you do potty training, that could also be a good one to put on the website, if you cover it. Most people wouldn't know it possible, when it really is possible, and I'm sure a lot of owners would love to not have their bird poop in one spot rather than everywhere.

Im working on flight recall still working on him hopping to my hand I havent got him flying to my hand yet.And I use a flightsuit so I dont need potty training.



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